Resignation Pro

Is this letter of resignation good enough?

Dear (manager), This resignation letter is to inform you that my last day as (title) at (company) will be November 11th, two weeks from today. I thoroughly enjoyed working for (company), but in the end working here interfered too much with my 1st priority, school. I appreciate the opportunity I have had working for the company and in other circumstances would have loved to continue working here. Sincerely, -------- Keep in mind it is only a part time job, i have only worked there about 2 months, and i am still a high school student. is it professional enough?

Public Comments

1. sounds pretty good to me!
2. Yes ! You have Intention,dates,and good comments.I am sure they will add "Eligible for re-hire" in your personal folder.Good Luck in your next job and school studies..::))
3. This is a very good letter. Well done!
4. Sounds pretty good. I'm a grammar nazi, so I just want to suggest revising your second line: I thoroughly enjoyed working at ____, however I felt that it was interfering with my education, which is my primary concern. I would like to thank you for the opportunity to work here. (I think "in other circumstances would have..." is a little awkward. I would just obliterate that line. It's implied in your previous statement of how much you enjoyed working there. It just seems repetitive. Overall, you did pretty good.)
5. You did a great job.
6. Sounds great to me. Doesn't burn any bridges and shows that you are thankful for their time and effort.